Tuesday, July 14, 2009

Plz help me!! Urgent !!?

I have written an e-mail. Could you plz rewrite it in the better way?? plzzzzzz


The bank is writing an e-mail to a company to ensure them of the availability of the buyer’s bank account.








“Referring to the.............'s requesting. We would like to inform you that the mentioned company has a/c in our bank. The company can use the amount of money available 35000000 USD for opening L/C (letter of credit) considering the Bank's terms and its policies.





This certification has issued for the company's application and has no other

Plz help me!! Urgent !!?
are you writing a scam letter,or what.
Reply:Ummm... a bank wouldn't send an e-mail like this. They would send a physical letter, probably with multiple signatures, including the president or CFO, considering the amount of money involved.





So, what are you doing? Trying to improve your Nigerian 419 scam e-mail?
Reply:are you sure you're not writing a nigerian scam letter?





lol
Reply:Hope this helps:





"Pertaining to the request from ............ Please be informed that the mentioned company has held an a/c in our bank. The company is entitled to issue L/C (letter of credit) of up to USD 35000000, adhering to the bank's terms and policies.





This certification is issued solely for the application of.......... only. "

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